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Poetry-Random and creepy.

Post by LostShadowSoul on Sun Feb 06, 2011 6:55 pm

Um...my poerty sucks, but...yeah. Most of them are free verse, but I think I have a haiku in there. Anyway, Enjoy:

Sleepless nights
and
restless days.
Hooded cloak,
black abyss.
silent sobs,
a breathless scream.
Drowning fear
piercing eyes,
bloody red,
burnt and dead.
Beyond words
cannot describe.
Sweet,
nauseating,
hot sticky smell.
Under covers,
shaking, crying.
Nightmare dreams,
Demon,
and lies.
Must find truth,
where ever it
hides.



Careless loving
child
Willing and free,
Innocent mind yet not
Poisoned
by suffering loss of he.
Smile now,
but will you not?
When waves cry
and
sails howl.
Ashes fly like
broken dreams,
above
water so pure-
It drowns in me.



Blood curdling screech
Cracking thunders roar through dark
No corpse was ever found.



Whispers-
dark, deep, and gurgled.
Peace forever,
the eternal slumber.
Guardians of the dead,
silver eyes,
hazel,
and red.
Let me be the one
to tell the tale of the dead.



And there you have it-my crappy poetry.
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Re: Poetry-Random and creepy.

Post by Jovial Bondservant on Sun Feb 06, 2011 7:32 pm

Very interesting. Very dark, you have a unique way of writing your poetry and I'm pretty fond of it. I don't read a LOT of poetry, but your style is very different from the few that I have read.

Anyway, I liked it. You did a fine job. ^_^
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Post by ShamarDJ on Sun Feb 06, 2011 8:49 pm

yeah i also thought it was very dark but it worked and i liked it Smile keep up the good work!!!
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Re: Poetry-Random and creepy.

Post by Rianna Lauren on Mon Feb 07, 2011 7:02 am

Wow. That was dark. o.o But pretty good! Keep it up. Smile
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Re: Poetry-Random and creepy.

Post by LostShadowSoul on Tue Feb 08, 2011 10:12 pm

Jovial Bondservant wrote:Very interesting. Very dark, you have a unique way of writing your poetry and I'm pretty fond of it. I don't read a LOT of poetry, but your style is very different from the few that I have read.

Anyway, I liked it. You did a fine job. ^_^

Um...thank you all for the comments. I don't really read poetry,just the ones that they make you read in class. Yeah, there just random poems, kind of odd, but whats even stranger is what caused me to write them. I'll try to get a fan fiction up soon, theres just a bunch of random ideas floating in my head, guess the key to a sucsess it the luck of the card. Fanfiction updates to come soon!
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Re: Poetry-Random and creepy.

Post by Rianna Lauren on Fri Feb 11, 2011 7:59 am

You motivate me to make poetry. o_o
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Re: Poetry-Random and creepy.

Post by LostShadowSoul on Fri Feb 11, 2011 5:55 pm

0_o

Really?...
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Re: Poetry-Random and creepy.

Post by Rianna Lauren on Sat Feb 12, 2011 11:16 am

Yeah. In fact I'm writing one right now. Difference is, mine's crappy. So, hah. XD
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Re: Poetry-Random and creepy.

Post by LostShadowSoul on Sat Feb 12, 2011 3:36 pm

hahaha. Just don't give up, YOU KIN DO IT! XD
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Post by Rianna Lauren on Fri Feb 18, 2011 3:05 am

Heheh. Hopefully. :3
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Re: Poetry-Random and creepy.

Post by LostShadowSoul on Fri Feb 18, 2011 6:49 pm

Go RIA! (you cannot see me right now...but I am dancing for your success!)


So...hyper right...now, SO need to get more sleep...
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