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Post by SuperboyFan19 on Fri Feb 18, 2011 6:49 am

Alright! This is a fanfic about Miss Martian and Artemis's rival crush on Superboy! This time is set in a time way after the current episode. Two new members have joined the team: Wondergirl (Donna Troy) and Beast Boy. Here goes:


Girl Fight

Megan sat on a wooden chair, sipping a warm cup of hot chocolate. She was wearing a furry, light pink coat with white trims. She also wore her new, matching, light pink winter boots. It was winter already, and the martian could even hear the cool breeze echoing around the kitchen. "Must be really cold tonight." she remarked.

"Got anymore of those?" she recognized that voice immediately. Megan turned around and saw Superboy standing out the door, his muscular arms crossed in a cool way...she smacked her forehead. I can't think these thoughts! she thought to herself.

"Uh, yes! Let me check", Megan replied, at the same time using her telekinesis to pull out the drawer which held the drink's powder. Lifting a jar of brown powder with her mind, the alien girl landed it on the table and opened it. "Apparently, we do have some." she said. Superboy raised an eyebrow before reaching for the jar. After taking it the Boy of Steel poured some into a cup, and also poured in some warm water. He mixed it with a teaspoon and took a sip.

"Delicious!" he exclaimed. Megan smiled. She took the jar and was about to close the lid on when she was interrupted.

"Hey, pass me the jar!" narrowing her eyes, Megan, using her telekinesis, passed it over to...Artemis. The blond girl was in her civilian clothes: an unbuttoned brown jacket with the sleeves rolled to make them shorter; underneath, a white tank top that revealed a bit of her belly; a black belt; tight blue pants; and black boots. Artemis had
not revealed her true name to the rest of the team yet, which was strange. The martian went out of her thoughts only to see Artemis looking dreamily at Superboy while making her hot chocolate.

"Why are you doing that?" Megan questioned.
"Doing what?" Artemis replied while drinking her hot chocolate.
"Superboy?" Megan hinted while pointing her green finger at Superboy.
The Boy of Steel murmured something, and then walked out of the kitchen.

"What are you talking about?" Artemis asked, looking at Megan innocently.
"I know you like him!" Megan growled.
"So what if I do?" Artemis said.
"Well, go find some other guy, cause he's mine! You hear me?" Megan snapped.
"P-lease! Why would he like you? You've got green skin!"
"He doesn't even know your name!"
"He does, it's Artemis!"
"I meant your real name."
"I don't even know his!"
"He doesn't even have a civilian name!"
"Oh would you just shut up!?"
"Why can't you?" The two girls glared at each other before they both stormed out of the kitchen, heading in different directions. Megan to the her room, which was to the left, and Artemis to her own room, which was to the right.



And that was chapter one! Hope you enjoyed it. Very Happy Don't worry, the battle won't just be between Miss Martian and Artemis, it'll include the My-Story-Wondergirl too!


Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters or the show this is based on.


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Re: Girl Fight

Post by LostShadowSoul on Fri Feb 18, 2011 10:28 pm

I personally love the story, but the producers are going to use Donna Troy in the show because she was the first Wondergirl.

Just thought I'd let you know.
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Re: Girl Fight

Post by SuperboyFan19 on Sat Feb 19, 2011 12:30 am

OK. I'll change Cassie to Donna. *Uses author powers to turn Cassie into Donna* There, that's better! XD You like the story? Thanks! That's just Chapter one and I'm going to write Chapter two, when I'm done with the freakin' homework.
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Re: Girl Fight

Post by SuperboyFan19 on Sat Feb 19, 2011 7:19 am

Okay, here's Chapter Two! Hope you enjoy. Smile

Artemis seethed with rage. Who does she thinks she is? Telling me what to do. The blond archer walked down the hall way and finally found her room, which had a green door trimmed with a darker shade. Artemis turned the golden-colored doorknob and opened the door. Deciding she would go to the Training Room, since that was the obvious place where Superboy was, Artemis grabbed her equipment and costume, stuffed them in a jade gym bag, then hurried out the door. She slammed it behind her, then checked that she had her bow. "Alright, now to go to flirt some more!" At least Miss Martian won't be there. At that, she smirked.

Miss Martian happily flew to the Training Room, her costume floating behind her. She giggled. Artemis won't be there to interrupt my little chat with Superboy! The martian was preparing to ask the Boy of Steel on a date. She repeated the plan in her head. First, train with Superboy, then after training, I'll ask him out! She landed outside the room's door and entered the arena. "There he is!" she whispered to herself, catching Superboy sparring with Kid Flash. Megan smiled and skipped towards the Girl's Changing Room.

Artemis paused when she got to the Training Room's entrance. She breathed slowly. "Alright, you can do this." Smiling, she quickly tapped the password on the number pad. When the doors slid apart from each other, she strolled calmly into the room. Artemis watched as Superboy evaded Kid Flash's tackle before tripping him and pinning him down. The teen-aged girl sighed dreamily.

Miss Martian threw her robe onto the clothing rack, then practically tore off her inner clothing. Now, completely naked except for her feet, the green-skinned girl lifted her bag of clothes using her telekinesis and dropped it into her hands. Then, she proceeded to put the clothes on.

Donna flew across the hallway with a smoothie in her hand. She had just returned from a visit to Themyscira. She was dressed in a white, ancient Greek robe, and was carrying a golden basket filled with many 'souvenirs'. Actually, they were gifts from her sister Amazons. The young Amazon opened the door to her room, still floating, and jumped, midair, onto her soft bed.Remembering why she had come back so quickly, Donna threw her robe off and donned her Wondergirl costume. Just before she left, Wondergirl swiftly took off her Amazon crown and replaced it with a golden tiara with a star symbol on it. Now, to go to my real destination!

Artemis snapped out of her thoughts and ran into the girl's changing room.

Megan heard footsteps coming from outside. Not to mention they were growing louder, and closer. She gasped and turned herself invisible, not before pulling on her blue boots. Great! Why did Artemis have to come here?! she thought grudgingly.

Artemis strolled into the changing room and pulled off her jacket and threw it onto the clothing rack. She took off her tank top, grabbed and pulled down her pants, and kicked off her boots.

Miss Martian stuck out her tongue at the naked girl in front of her and almost said a "Whoa!"when Artemis kicked off her boots in her direction. Deciding to make a move on Superboy first, Megan phased out the door and became visible again. The redhead had finally mastered Density-Shifting, but had trouble phasing particular substances, such as water and electricity.

Artemis pulled on her costume as fast as she could, grabbed her bow and ran out of the Girl's Changing Room. Since she was in a hurry, she didn't see the green figure in front of her and Slam! collided with...Miss Martian! "What are you doing here?" she questioned. Realizing she didn't see Megan was because she had turned invisible, Artemis's rage grew.
"What am I doing here? I could ask the same thing about you!" Miss Martian snapped.
"It's none of your business!" Artemis snapped back.
"Then it's none of your business why I'm here, too!"
"You're here for Superboy, aren't you?" Artemis sighed. "Well, hands off lady, cause he's off the market!" the protege of Green Arrow showed her fist at Miss Martian.
"Shut up! He was mine before you came along!" Miss Martian growled. When Artemis showed her her fist, the green martian narrowed her eyes in rage.

"Hey, Superboy!" Miss Martian whirled around and gaped at the sight in front of her. Donna was looking at Superboy. The look that was always used when someone had a crush or was flirting. Artemis pushed Megan to the side and stomped towards Wondergirl. Shaking her head, Miss Martian flew after Artemis, wanting to demand why the Amazon was flirting with Superboy.

Wondergirl noticed her fellow girl teammates coming. "Hi! Why so angry?" she waved at them.
"Why so angry? Why so angry?!" Artemis practically yelled.
"What's the matter? Can I help?" the black-haired girl placed her hand on Artemis's shoulder.
"Well, you can 'help' by getting your hands of my Superboy!" Artemis snapped. Wondergirl saw, out of the corner of her eye, that the boys had been looking with interest, Superboy in particular. "Excuse me, but your Superboy? Last time I checked, he wasn't an object!" Donna saw Miss Martian and prayed that she was there to support her, and not Artemis.

And that's it. Ooh, argument! Yeah, you'll see a lot of those in future chapters. tongue Smile lol!
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters or the show this is based on.
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Post by LostShadowSoul on Sat Feb 19, 2011 12:03 pm

Wow-I like how you use descirptive words, my only consern is how fast the story is moving-shouldn't there be aleast some rising action before you hit the climax?
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Post by SuperboyFan19 on Sat Feb 19, 2011 11:26 pm

Actually, if I answered your question about how fast the story is moving, it would spoil-ALOT. Well, not really. Trust me, the story will be long, that's all I can tell you.
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Post by LostShadowSoul on Sun Feb 20, 2011 4:11 pm

Ok-I shall wait patently for more...
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Re: Girl Fight

Post by SuperboyFan19 on Mon Feb 21, 2011 8:14 am

Yes, you shall. Sorry, I can only do this on weekends because I've got HW. Oh, and this weekend I might not be able to post more chapters up. Why? Well, because I'm going with my mom to a Hot Spring resort. Also, it might not have Wi-Fi, so yeah, you should be able to follow up. Very Happy
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Post by LostShadowSoul on Mon Feb 21, 2011 3:39 pm

Ok...I'm currently working on my own fanfiction inbetween art. Long work in progress...I shall wait(homewotk sucks, I do mine at 10pm when everyones in bed) Going with your mom to a hot spring resort? Damn, you got it good. But I cannot argue with yo because I'm going to Timberrigde hotel in Wisconsin(Cheese...) Wi-Fi is kindof hard to get...
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Post by SuperboyFan19 on Tue Feb 22, 2011 4:45 am

Then we're even. Hope you have a good time! Very Happy Oh wait, we've still got a few days more.
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Post by LostShadowSoul on Tue Feb 22, 2011 5:08 pm

Wow. Lucky...you got more time there? I just got home(still waiting patently, but about to fly to china-find you-and beg for more chapters)
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Post by SuperboyFan19 on Wed Feb 23, 2011 4:51 am

You have no tickets, and you have no idea where my house is! tongue Not to mention you have no idea how I look like.
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Post by LostShadowSoul on Wed Feb 23, 2011 5:13 pm

Hmm....I can always guess....
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Post by SuperboyFan19 on Thu Feb 24, 2011 4:59 am

Yeah, the first 12 year old you see you grab him and beg him for more chapters...nice. As if! He wouldn't even understand you Razz
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Post by LostShadowSoul on Thu Feb 24, 2011 6:03 pm

What? You speak english...right? And-I KNOW you have Ben 10 pajamas, and that you watch young justice, make graphics on the computer, and you have currently gone to a hot spring resort with your mom...now-to hack a government computer...Still it'd be like a 1-in-a-thousand chance I find you.

Nah, I'm not going to hack a government computer, I really don't feel like going to jail...how far are you with the new chatper?
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Post by SuperboyFan19 on Fri Feb 25, 2011 5:00 am

I speak English, I'm just saying, what if you grabbed the wrong kid? Anyways, about my chapter, it's almost finished. Darn! I had to sacrifice my HW reputation for this story.
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Post by LostShadowSoul on Sun Feb 27, 2011 7:08 pm

HA! You actually do your homework? I do the important assinments first then complete the lesser ones later(I do my homework when everyones asleep, and no-one knows, so if Iget caught-the homework that really matters is done).
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